Critique my Edit +K

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Glenn.King

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So i got a t2i recently and this is the second edit i have made with it, just want opinions, ideas, and suggestions on the edit. Also not sure why the HD option doesnt come up when i upload to vimeo?

Filmed in 1280x720 60fps

Sorry im dumb and cant embed right, http://vimeo.com/18261270

+k For suggestions, ideas, or things you liked thanks :)
 
I think this edit is very well made and I like it. You change angles, it is good quality and the tricks is also nice!
 
All of this is preference, but i think this will help.

First off your colors look a little flat.

Not sure if you color corrected or not, but you should shoot with flat colors then color correct in post, it gives you the most options for how you want your colors to look.

Also, your cutaway filler was good, but it was repetitive and there was too much of it. Instead of using all filler shots of their faces, try their skis, or closeups of their hands and whatnot. Riding>Filler.

Last, get creative! Theres no law that says everything has to be filmed on a tripod, make a handle or something and get some super low shots and follow shots and whatnot.

Other than that,

it was pretty sweet.
 
i liked it but more scenery and different "non-busy" transitions are good like a crossfade. but good video
 
thanks for the tips, i shot with flat colors and did not color correct after, i have color corrected before and will definitely try to do it more.
 
intro was sick, transitions had to much going on, they were good but just less of them, like between riders, also lightiing was dull, good edit tho sick intro.
 
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