Critique my edit/ filming

twsnow22

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I would like to get good at filming/editing this summer.. can you guys give me advice on what to fix, and how to make the video flow well with the song ect...

 
That was an entertaining edit with some good shots, and the music flowed well too I thought
things to work on:the exposure kept changing around 1:30-1:45, and made those shots hard to watch
try to get at least some of the shots to show the full skater, it was annoying sometimes to only see the legs and board
give the edit some decency and put it on vimeo, or youtube at least
otherwise,my favorite shot was at 0:20 where you panned to the scooter-er, made me chuckle

 
thanks a bunch..i usually put stuff on vimeo but it wont let me upload right now. so i put it on facebook, and the quality got destroyed.
 
pentax just updated the firmware for my camera and I believe its going to solve the exposure problems..but thanks for pointing it out I would have overlooked it for sure.
 
Apart from the exposure issues, I thought it was pretty decent. Some creative shots in there. I liked it over all
 
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