Critique My Design Please (+K)

WinterStick

WinterStick

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It's a very simple design, but tell me which design you like best and if there is anything I can do to improve upon it!

It will be on a t-shirt.

+K to any helpful responses

1)

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2)

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3) (same as #2, with a smaller "in")

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you should use a different color than blue for the outline, or maybe fill in the outline. If it were my design i would just do ILLINOIS with ILL in red. The "i put..." part reminds me of those douchy nike shirts
 
Try this? Just a quick thought cause the letters follow and it seems interesting

Same style design as what you have, but do

I PUT THE

I L L

I N

N O I S

Probably gonna look stupid but cause "in" follows "ill" in Illinois
 
Haha, I like that idea! But it was better in theory than in practice :( It takes away from the look of those douchy nike shirts that four1two mentioned. I've been trying to make the outline thicker, but I can't figure out how. Guess I'll have to change the color so it's easier to see.

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FIRST ONE. cause it says ill in which is like ill'in which means something in the hood I'm sure. also make the lines thickr
 
I think you should have the ILL red in the illinois aswell, kind of like

I put the ill in illinois

Of course with the colors, but the italics are just to show the idea
 
I'm watching this from behind my ridiculously expensive and meticulous colour calibrated monitor.

At half brightness the contrast between the colours is still to harsh, it is simply painful too look at.
 
Tried this after you said it, but since the red "ILL" already stands out so much, having two in there is just like rubbing it in your face.
 
I can't really decide because the writing is incredibly thin and that makes it harder to read.
 
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