Critique my college essay! (It's about skiing)

13560898:Park. said:
hahaha nah i was actually depressed when it happened, and the point of my essay is to show that I try to have creativity without boundaries. Authority is a very strict boundary that is not always right and in my essay I used a doctor instead of police, so I felt it was restrained enough to be ok.
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Hello

Your goal for writing an essay (I mean that you write an essay in order to show that you have creative potential) is the right goal. I follow this goal too. But there is one problem! What the problem when revealing creative potential by writing an essay exist? I write not competently, but creatively. Therefore, I need help from custom essay writing service www.paperial.com which corrects my grammatical errors - so, which helps me solve this problem. After checking my essays on grammar - essays are ideal, because essays have no grammatical errors, and essays are written creatively. Thus, I can show my essay as a proof of the fact that I have a creative potential, -> so, I am a creative person.
 
13993545:AnfisaKater said:
Hello

Your goal for writing an essay (I mean that you write an essay in order to show that you have creative potential) is the right goal. I follow this goal too. But there is one problem! What the problem when revealing creative potential by writing an essay exist? I write not competently, but creatively. Therefore, I need help from custom essay writing service www.paperial.com which corrects my grammatical errors - so, which helps me solve this problem. After checking my essays on grammar - essays are ideal, because essays have no grammatical errors, and essays are written creatively. Thus, I can show my essay as a proof of the fact that I have a creative potential, -> so, I am a creative person.
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You don’t think he maybe finished that essay sometime in the last 3 years?

Also it’s pretty obvious that paperial is your scam website, as it is written in the same broken English you are using in this post. Also it’s obvious that all the customer reviews are written by you. The fact that the credit card logos on your webpage are janky black and white knockoffs tells me that you don’t actually process credit card payments, you just steal credit card numbers.

I guess my biggest question is why would someone hire you to write an essay in English when you obviously don’t speak it? This is one of the lamest scam websites I’ve ever seen. I award you no points, and may god have mercy on your soul.

**This post was edited on Jan 31st 2019 at 4:28:09am
 
..soooo did the OP or the nonconformist get into college with their essays???

**This post was edited on Feb 1st 2019 at 8:51:23am
 
13993547:Sharko said:
You don’t think he maybe finished that essay sometime in the last 3 years?

Also it’s pretty obvious that paperial is your scam website, as it is written in the same broken English you are using in this post. Also it’s obvious that all the customer reviews are written by you. The fact that the credit card logos on your webpage are janky black and white knockoffs tells me that you don’t actually process credit card payments, you just steal credit card numbers.

I guess my biggest question is why would someone hire you to write an essay in English when you obviously don’t speak it? This is one of the lamest scam websites I’ve ever seen. I award you no points, and may god have mercy on your soul.

**This post was edited on Jan 31st 2019 at 4:28:09am
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I want to say that Paperial is not a fraudulent website, I am an ordinary user who does good for people. I am an ordinary user who had experience with this site which helps me with writing papers. My level of writing is not good, as you said, so I use this site. My teachers tell me the same that you say, so I have to use this site. And since this site benefits me, I decided to recommend it to other users. The credit card logos on the website’s webpage are not fakes and the site processes credit card payments . I know this because I transfer payments for my papers to these credit cards. This is not a rough fraudulent site - this is a site that helps students.
 
13993573:maejst said:
It has zero flow.
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I don’t have any idea what stream this site has. It is important for me that people who are professionals and who work for this site are good people who help me and can help many people.
 
topic:Slush said:
I think to myself, "I can do this... I can do this..." As I go through the motions for the fiftieth time, I feel like this is what I've been waiting for: ever since the first day I saw someone throw down in at my local mountain's terrain park, ever since I got my first pair of twin tipped skis, ever since I decided that I was going to be a park skier.
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Oxygen has left the chat
 
13994057:AnfisaKater said:
I don’t have any idea what stream this site has. It is important for me that people who are professionals and who work for this site are good people who help me and can help many people.
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He wasn’t talking to you. You are trying to hard. It is obvious that paperial is your scam website.

Where are you from? What school work did the site help you with?
 
13994341:Sharko said:
He wasn’t talking to you. You are trying to hard. It is obvious that paperial is your scam website.

Where are you from? What school work did the site help you with?
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I don't know why you decided so, and why you think that! I have not a commercial attitude to this site. I am just a good girl who helps people. This site helped me with writing essays that teachers asked me and which I cannot write. Writing an essay is difficult for me. If the essay is of a specific type, such as a critical essay , a descriptive essay — I have even more problems with writing such an essay, because there are some special structures for these essays, which I cannot bring to life.
 
You should drop out honestly, you're gonna be really sad when you get into the workforce thinking a white collar job is waiting for you :/
 
Jesus Christ I was a retard back in the day

I still got into uni with this dumper of an essay
 
14308761:FrankStoun said:
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EAT MY ASSHOLE U POOFTER AHAHAHAHAHAHAGA
 
14308771:ColoradoDogfart said:
Where did you end up going
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Grove City College, graduated and now have a great job as a software dev. Only industry that hires brainlets like me
 
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