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[OddlyShapedFeet]

say like 5 words how he got expelled,

ex. "he was later expelled for a bomb threat"

 

[kyle_w]

the site i got the info from doesnt say how i got expelled, and i cant find it

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[whattheshit]

"We're holding these signs because we don't want to be sent to the siberian gulags"

 

[OddlyShapedFeet]

http://www.spartacus.schoolnet.co.uk/RUSstalin.htm

go there my friend

 

[back_woods]

maybe say something about the nagtive side of his reign too. Espiecally during WWII. maybe watch "Stalingrad"....maybe he was brave and all that but im pretty sure he was responsible for some amazing huge atrocities. holocaust style.

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[whattheshit]

exactly, don't glorify stalin. he was a ruthless dictator.

 

[General_Shredgnar]

You missed the part where he slaughters thousands of his own people for the creation of military weapons.

I wouldn't call him a peoples man.

'Its pretty sad when your penis is longer than the amount of air these little kids are bragging about.'

 

[whattheshit]

yea.. moral support of his people.

IF he felt he wasn't getting the moral support from his people he'd send them to siberia.

so yea. change that sentence. you're forgeting that he was a dictator and that people had no other choice then to show their moral support.

 

[skogenjake]

ok it was fine when you posted it. above a 70.

pretty sick

 

[kyle_w]

if i get too involved in this thing it will be over the limit which is 1 page.

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