Couple new songs let me know what you think (rick roll rap remix and some jazzy tunes from a fellow NSer's beat)

[SirFryanator]

http://www.thesixtyone.com/NGP/collection/all/

I really tried to get the voice a lot better this time, also quality and beats. If you don't like rap then don't critique.

I know I sound white, I don't try to sound black, yes my accent comes out when I rap. I don't want to explain myself other than that. things that I can fix would be nicer to be pointed out.

Thanks for any support, love, or critique. Hate, even, if it's constructive!

- Matt

 

[steezebeast]

new songs are sick. rick rolled lol

 

[SirFryanator]

^oh and mods, I'm not actually rick rolling people it's just a beat

thanks

 

[dodgeridge*rider]

dude

none of the mods would care about that

haha

but i dont really like your voice

no offense

the rick roll beat is sick as fuck though

 

[SirFryanator]

well sorry I can't change my voice. any other suggestions?

and btw if mods think anything is a rick roll then they delete it, so I think they do care

 

[Peter.]

Try not to use that echo effect too much, yeah, for some reason your voice to me just sounds like you are talking, not necessarily rapping.

Sorry, that's just my opinion.

 

[GingerKid08]

Not to piss you off or anything, but your flow is pretty terrible. Your forcing it sooo hard. Beats are seet though.

 

[GingerKid08]

Someone had to tell you the truth eventually

 

[Elg]

what program are you using?

 

[SirFryanator]

appreciate it man. like, the tone is forced or the flow is forced?

 

[Mooserz]

honestly if i were you I would stick to making beats because you seem to be really nasty at that~ rapping however not so much~ but if you want it keep going for it man dont let anyone stop you

 

[GingerKid08]

Both, It sounds like your just trying to emulate the generic rap flow, it sounds really tense and stiff.

 

[SirFryanator]

alright. got any artists that you would recommend me listen to? I try to be original but I need some help at times

 

[statuswhitegirl]

the rick roll beat is fuckin illbut i have to agree with the others, i dont like the voice, i think it sounds too much like a white kid trying to rap, no offense, maybe its too forced try just normally rapping without forcing it too sound good

 

[WillStart]

your beats are getting soo sick, keep it up matt

 

[SirFryanator]

this one I tried to get it to be less forced and more flow-ey.

this is just a once-through so just see if it's better since I'm definitely working with it

http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSgYlW_YGo

 

[IanAvery-Leaf]

Dope! Rick roll LOL

 

[T-Holt]

Dude, the beats are so dope. It's hard to make your voice sound better cus it's your voice. My advice is focus on the beats, and then the lyrics, and then the singing. That's my order of how good they are. But don't let anyone stop you from doin it if you like it.

 

[laxstar]

hate to repeat what others have already said but beats are really fucking sick deffinatly your talent rapping not so much not trying to be an asshole but d what u love...