Community Portrait Critique. +k

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Merrill

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I was assigned to make a short video exploring something that was happening in my community. I chose the skatepark topic because i have been hearing about it since i was a little kid and i want to have a part in making it happen. It would be very much appreciated if you guys could give me a critique on it so that i can improve it before i have to turn it in. The biggest thing that i don't like is the titles. I know they aren't good and i just can't seem to be able to figure out how to get them to look natural. I will give +k for critiques, especially the ones that can help me improve the video. Thanks!

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watching it. first off, the text is hard to read since its black. Maybe make it white or with an outline or something
 
The actual footage shot was really great! I REALLY liked your framing and colors and thought that over all you footage was amazing. The only thing that I questioned at certain points was your editing. Some on the text was tacky, and the shoots at the beginning with the swingset, etc, were jumping wayyy to fast for me. I realize your trying to go along with the music, but that isn't as important in this type of video.
 
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