Commercial critique - first time

[BA.berger]

Skeikampen reklamefilm 2013 - vinter (versjon 1) from BackYard Productions on Vimeo.

/images/flash_video_placeholder.pngMade this video for the ski resort, what do you think?Password: skeikampen2013

Thanks!

 

[BA.berger]

trying again, K+ for all critisism or comments!

 

[boomie]

I liked the flow of it, maybe try to color correct more though to have the shots match up

 

[buttrapinpirate]

first...

+k for Two Door Cinema Club,

But yeah great commercial! As said above, color correction to match stuff would be nice (like the difference between shots around 45 sec), but other than that, it's really good! Maybe also duck the audio a little earlier, like around when you switch from the night shot to the logo.

 

[BA.berger]

Thanks!Ill try to correct the colors and that audio thing!

Anything else?

 

[Mag]

0:48, the 2 black bars fuckup and keep wiggling.

1:18 there's some weird compression artifacts there.

 

[gusestomp]

2 door cinema club.. yes.

+k

 

[BA.berger]

haha

 

[Mar-O]

I liked it allot actually, but I didn't really like the shot of the cafeteria inside at 0.55, I think it was to basic with one pan shot from inside witch makes it seem like it the cafeteria is full and that you could have done that part allot better. But overall I really liked the shots and the flow.

 

[.qzyxya]

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[BA.berger]

skeikampen presentasjonsfilm - vinter from Bjørn Are Berger on Vimeo.

/images/flash_video_placeholder.png New version here, unfortunately with another song for you Two door cinema club fans.

Ctitques appreciated!

 

[rudedog41]

Definitely enjoyed the first one from a non technical perspective, even despite the things magnus pointed out...It was probably just because the first one had lyrics, idk but it made it feel like it was going somewhere. The other one just kind of felt repetitive because of the song.