Brighton Edit Critique! first use of the GH4

30 seconds of b-roll before the first trick. Most people will start watching another video before then.

Too much slow motion.

Too many lifestyle shots

Filming and composition of the tricks was good though.
 
the broll looked really good though just too much, you shot from a ton of different angles which was nice, a bit too much slow mo
 
I thought it was good up until it completely lost my interest. I feel like the flow could have been much much better so that you keep the viewers attention. Too much slo-mo and it took way too long to get into the skiing
 
too much b roll and too much slowmotion. Some shots were really sick tho. That panning shot of the dfd tube was sick. and the shot of broto's 2 on to switch was sick too.

Edit didnt really have a flow so id work on that, and cut down the b roll a lot there was way too much in there.
 
Thank you guys really! All really quality feedback that I will undoubtably take into account next go around! I agree on the slomo and b-roll, I just went 96fps crazy that weekend with the new gh4.
 
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