Freshbakedbread
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"Boxed In" - Short film [6:00] "Audience Choice Award" feedback appreciated
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miroz
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Wonderful! Very fun to watch! Great job!
A few things I picked out:
I didn't like the title, I thought it was misplaced. It interrupted the flow of the video for me. I would've liked to see it earlier in the video; either earlier or at the very end. I don't care about the title when he drops the box, I want to see where he goes!
At 1:55 I noticed that his DVD/mags/mop are gone. Missed the continuity there...
Love the shot at 2:00
2:10 was a little blown out for me.
One thing that I liked about the city scene till 2:17 was that it was all handheld. It was lifelike. It was like I was watching the scene unfold from within the setting. At 2:17 you go to that tripod shot of the kid panning his head, and its just so slow. It jars me out of the daydream you were painting.
At 4:47 he puts on his left sandal for the second time.
The colors were great, especially in that last scene. This was so creative and very funny, I loved it. Well done, very well done, you definitely earned the award you received.
A few things I picked out:
I didn't like the title, I thought it was misplaced. It interrupted the flow of the video for me. I would've liked to see it earlier in the video; either earlier or at the very end. I don't care about the title when he drops the box, I want to see where he goes!
At 1:55 I noticed that his DVD/mags/mop are gone. Missed the continuity there...
Love the shot at 2:00
2:10 was a little blown out for me.
One thing that I liked about the city scene till 2:17 was that it was all handheld. It was lifelike. It was like I was watching the scene unfold from within the setting. At 2:17 you go to that tripod shot of the kid panning his head, and its just so slow. It jars me out of the daydream you were painting.
At 4:47 he puts on his left sandal for the second time.
The colors were great, especially in that last scene. This was so creative and very funny, I loved it. Well done, very well done, you definitely earned the award you received.
