Ad for Skatepark Critique

Roachey

Roachey

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/images/flash_video_placeholder.pnghttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8RyRtCzPQtA&feature=slpl

Hey guys just looking for a critique on this video I made for a good town friend who recently opened a skatepark for the community. Its not really an ad but I was trying to go for that rather then just some edit. Let me know what you guys think and please watch in HD!

-K for hate

+K for Constructive Critiscm
 
nice, ive never seen or heard of an ad for a skatepark but this looks pretty good. if i didnt already skateboard and have had previous experience with kinda youth center kinda places i would wanna go
 
Pretty good. i think you did a pretty good job of showing the whole place and showing what it has to offer.

a few things i didn't care for too much was the overlays of footage at the beginning. i think maybe if you would have just had those without them overlapping, just quicker cuts, it could have been a little more effective only because i couldn't really tell if that was stuff they sell or just had for show.

you had some good shots in there but i think some got a little too tight, maybe have a shot or two as wide as your lens will go just to kind of show the whole place overall.

but i liked it, makes me want to check it out for sure
 
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