A Recent Bike Edit Critique

A little shaky for sure. Some of the pans with the riders were really abrupt. Typically if a shot is panning should already be panning when you cut into that shot.. It just feels awkward to go from stagnant to panning. Maybe thats just me but hey otherwise good job keep it up!
 
what's your budget, do you mind weight, are you shooting any extreme focal lengths? 600mm+?
 
My budget is probably 200 at the most because right now I am currently rebuilding my camera setup to m4/3 and I was planning on getting a Olympus 40-150 as of right now so there is no need for the 600mm+
 
I wold do some work with the sound. Like when they are launching have the sound of the bike and when they land with the music. To me the sound was really weird.
 
Overall good feel and the editing was solid. That filming though... You had the right idea for most of the shots, but often they were shaky/ didn't follow the rider smoothly. New tripod would be rad.

Also when the rider is doing a trick mid line and the other jumps are just straight airs, film closer to the trick. I saw this a couple times in the 3 jump line mid way through the edit.
 
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