2014 Reel Rough Cut (Critique Please)

[j-cal]

Hey NS,

I have been racking my brain working on a new reel for a new website i am working on. It would be great if i could get some feedback.

Here is a low quality uncolored rough cut.
https://vimeo.com/95604873

Thanks,

Jacob Callaghan

 

[j-cal]

PSWRD:reel

 

[CheddarJack]

Honestly, I really disliked the song. The fast pace is a bit different as far as reels go but I think with the right song it could be a lot better.

 

[MLJ]

^ What he said. A majority of the shots are slomo, and the song is quite fast. Maybe try to add some livelier shots with less slomo and more action going on, or try finding a slightly mellower song.

 

[CrotchKiller]

Had to mute, footage was good but the song ruined it.

 

[Bread.]

Change the song and get rid of that last shot

 

[j-cal]

Thanks for the feedback, i geuse the song is not a go. I have been switching songs so much and trying to find the right one. I geuse i need to find another.

 

[Daski]

says the video is private...

 

[Bhroscoe]

says the video is private...

if you actually looked you would see the the password is reel

 

[j-cal]

updated the reel and put a new song

 

[rlee]

I like the song better now too. However I did think you had cuts which went by waaay to fast that it was to hard to see what was going on. I wanted to see the clips for longer to really get a grasp of everything as I know the shots are good, don't cut them too short.