i jsut watched it again. solid edit for your first time. take away the shot of the guy speaking french though. and i think without all the snowboarding shots..it will be awesome..and yea maybe get a little timelapse in there..like while your driving up just shoot out the window or...
dude good edit. whenever my friend and i have posted stuff on here what has really helped us make it better is the input from people. so im going to give you my personal opinion if that matters to you.
-good song
-make the intro a little more strong.
-more fading into scenes on the intro..the...
dont be so direct...make your sentences more vague and detailed. try to prolong apology..dont just apologize at the very begining of the letter. prolong everything
wakeboardin, wakeskating, chillin on the boat, the occasional summer sess, ttrampolining, those are all things im really looking forward to this summer.