the skier is losing some of the attention due to all the white snow, the rock and the sunset. He almost blends into the photo with the red and white suit on the red sky and white snow. There is also a distraction beside the box, the black thing takes away some focus from the box. <br>
If the strobe was zoomed in (with a snuff or tube) so only the skier is lit, and the landing with another out of frame strobe, that would be my money shot. <br>