its a good edit, but as fare as im concerned that song is for joke edits and funny topics, your clips were petty serious so id recommmend a more serious song to go with it, and dont put as much slow mo. theres my 2 cents
oh and the filming was well done and it has potential you just have to edit ti properly with the right song and it sshould be marvelous.
yeah some stuffs slowed down way too much but it could work good with the song if it had a faster flow with the music but the starting timelapses before it says starring works really good