i cant rate it high, but i can give you some things to work on... first of all you dont need much speed off of cliffs, the speed comes from the drop and you just have to prep in the air, second off just keep ridin, dont film til you think you have some shit worth documentin, spend less time filming and more time riding
keep filming yourself the much you can to fix your default and improve your style but please....don't upload your video before getting a lot....(did I say a lot ?) better !!!!