comprehensive is deff not the right word, guy...and yeah people are giving him a little to much shit...we'll give him a break...pretty funny 'i just begain to rail' hmm....double meanings...and one more thing, why was your shot on the rail sideways? hmm its interesting
okay what do you want us to be comprehensive about? the editing or the skiing or both? cuz the editing was probably the single worst editing i have seen on this site. as far as the skiing goes, not bad for your first year, but i only saw 180s off jumps and that 3 you did in the pipe was small, plus the rail being sideways was so shitty you couldn't even really make it out. other than that the 180s, although small, looked to have a decent amount of style and i did see a few grabs in there. keep skiing and keep pushing yourself to spin more and things will come pretty fast.
Hmmm dont know what to say about that....either try some bigger tricks or start snowblading. You wont get better if you dont try stuff bigger than a 180 and throw it off some bigger jumps.
