Yet another critique my edit thread

[traylortrash]

Just wanted some helpful critique on my latest edit from last weekend at abay... It ends pretty fast as I used all of the useable footy I had, but I tried to make the best of the few shots we did get.
Grouchy from Frank Traylor on Vimeo.
And while you're at it, if you wanted to throw in some critique for another edit I made a few months ago it'd be appreciated...
Frank Traylor 2009 Self-Edit (with a lil 2010) from Frank Traylor on Vimeo.

Thanks!

 

[A.Eberhard]

I'll comment on the season edit:

I liked it a lot especially the intro and the variation of shots throughout was perfect. I wouldn't change anything you did about it 10/10.

 

[traylortrash]

Sweeeet, thanks very much.

 

[ODarrow]

First edit was soo smooth but one thing is that it's always good to post the song name and artist at the beginning or end of the edit but over all the edit itself was sick. What was the song? Thanks

 

[traylortrash]

thanks man, and yeah good point, I did make sure to post it in the description on vimeo though. its breath by the grouch

 

[Ian.Ham]

In your season edit you have like four 450 out's in a row, it looks sick the first time but not 4 in a row. Pretty sick otherwise

 

[traylortrash]

haha yeah man believe me I agree, lack of variety as far as tricks go is a bit of problem in that edit... that's like all the shots I had though, I really like to pretz4s and lots of em I guess... and thanks

 

[traylortrash]

anyone else?

 

[MADDECENT]

SO BAD FRANK! YOU SUCK!

 

[traylortrash]

go away christian... haha

 

[family_vacation]

Video of the day, nice job!