WTB critique please.

LjayCinema

LjayCinema

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first ever "film" (more of an edit in my eyes) i ever created, and i just wanted to know NS opinion on what i need to work on, what i could have done better or what you liiked about it. I made it in a super crunch of time so i know i could have done better but tell me what you guys think.

BeauTiFul from Loren Creer on Vimeo.

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also the quality is meh due to my camera being the canon GL2. upgrading to a 7D in june so pretty stoked.
 
Good vibe, good skiing, great song.

One thing I didn't like though was that it jumped around a bit. I felt that you included shots of snow/snow falling that led into park shots, and then there was no transition into powder. I felt like you could have grouped everything together a little better, and that would've made it easier to watch and absorb.

Just my two cents yo.
 
It was pretty good I wouldn't change anything you did about it. The skiing was really good and you had a good variety of angles and shots which made it flow nicely. 10/10 and enjoy your new 7d.
 
ur free hand stuff looked a bit off at the beginning but only got way better after 30 seconds. the slo mo clips are amazing, skiing is solid. this is a great edit.
 
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