Writing a love story

[BLUMPKING]

I have to write a love story for health class, because it deals with healthy relationships. So far my characters names are Xavier and La`Quisha. La`Quisha is suspicious of Xavier because they dont hang out as much as they used to and shes heard stories that he`d been in public places with other hoes. Eventually this is gonna lead into La`Quisha confronting him about it, and Xavier freaking out, beating her. I also need to think of a resolution to this.Gimmme ideas, this shits supposed to be like 3 pages long.

 

[shr@gler]

the bitch smartens up, makes X a sandwich, happily ever after

 

[BLUMPKING]

Go make macintosh tv products

 

[panojibber]

You could kill 2 birds with one stone and have Xavier get into drug troubles, and have the police kill him. And the LaQuisha could run away and become a crack-whore.

Drugs, sex, domestic violence, prostitution! That's an A-plus. Call it an indeterminate ending and say that you wrote it like that for artistic purposes. And everyone has to get HIV.

 

[BLUMPKING]

Beautiful. I also plan on having a sex scene in here somewhere, too. Probably after she hears about him cheating, but before she confronts him. So she knows hes using her and its kinda awkward and kinky

 

[Rachy]

You should just write the story of ECB...... it has a happy ending. Kinda.

 

[soulskier]

go for a hundred and twenty yard walk on a hundred yard pier

 

[freestyler540]

pretty shitty premise, so get to work