Whatcha think of my edit ?~@#$%&*^

Pretty cool with the black and white. Change your title style at the beginning, it felt too unprofessional for me. Make it a little bit shorter, most people will lose interest after about 2 minutes if its just an edit. Lastly, don't have every rail slide in slow mo it just drug everything out. Do slow mo on like a big trick or something. Hope this helped!
 
^Dudes definetly right, it shouldn't be this long, and every rail hit shouldn't be in slow mo because people will lose interest. Aside from the slow motion everything else. Really that's all I have, keep it up
 
Get way closer to the action, especially with a wide angle like that. All those shots were from a million miles away
 
Also rather than slomoing the whole trick, you could try just the bit when he/she is on the rail, or just the last bit of the trick etc, cause it keeps it interesting.
 
Cut down some of the shots, they're a little excessive. Also I'm not that big of the fan of the constant b&w filter. Also don't have slo-mo for all of your shots, it gets a little redundant.

Just my 2 cents
 
what everyone else said. i had to mute it, for some reason i hated that song his voice was weird. but that is a subjective opinion that has nothing to do with how the video was actually edited
 
Closer shots with fisheye, less slomo, and lots of the shots were not properly exposed. But not terrible
 
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