Whatcha think? *Edit Critique*

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Here is a little edit I put together of me working in the tune shop in

Skjersaa's Ski & Board in Bend, OR. Messing around with some color

correction, dolly shots, assign buttons on my camera for focus play,

etc. Criticism welcome and appreciated.

Shot with:

Sony HDV-Z1U

Home-built dolly

Edited with:

Final Cut 5.0.4

 
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:45 was a rad shot!!!!! Overall that was dope man. I can tell you were probably a bit bored, with these types of shots maybe grab a homie and make a short film before the season?
 
this...

and i thought the opening shot was pretty neat and sort of a cool way of doing it but the last time you used that same look for a close up and not close up in the same shot maybe put them side by side or on top of each other to mix it up, just a thought, nice tho

 
Yeah totally, tryin' to stay entertained and working by myself...

I hear ya on the split screen shots, the first one I was stoked on and the second I was up in the air (thought all the different colors and contrasts was cool) wasn't the best format for showing it off though.

Thanks guys, any other pointers, critiques, criticisms are appreciated.

 
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