What needs improvement?

to many cuts... kind of over edited at a few parts, also the twixtor had warping and was unneeded. The filming was great though.
 
i would say stay away from overlays basically all the time. i can't think of the last time i saw an overlay in a non-professional production that i thought looked good.

i also thought the filming was quite good, and while i'm not a fan of the tilt shift thing, that first shot was pretty solid. there were definitely too many cuts; i liked your shots and i wanted to see the whole clips play out.
 
alright thanks a bunch! i got rid if all the overlays. im working on getting rid of a lot of the cuts. Its just a little bit difficult because the edit can only be 1 minute and we did some reallllly slow pans and such. Just trying to fit a lot of footage into a minute

 
Well what everyone has already said, and i think the first timelapse is a little bright, and could be darkened a little
 
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