What do you think of this?

tom.skier

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Hi NS,

Yes, this is yet another one of those feedback threads but don't knock it yet! I am looking to pursue filming/editing as a career - beginning 'Film and Video Production' at university here in England in September. I have made a bunch of more 'fun' videos before but this has been my first attempt at more of a professional workflow and everything (transcoding footage, basic colour grading etc..)

Even though I am only really now starting out as I haven't even started my course yet - I am always looking to learn and improve my work so any constructive criticism/thoughts would be much appreciated.

Many thanks,

Tom.

 
-careful of overusing the film burn. Even twice at the beginning was too much.

-switch up the angles, watching the same one over and over again gets boring.

-what tripod were you using? Some of the shots looked a little shaky to me.

Those were te things I noticed while watching it, it was pretty good though
 
also it looks really warm to me. all your whites seem really yellow. the colors were decent but nothing special IMO
 
i dont know why, but that setup actually looked really fun to me. maybe august is getting to me...
 
Lol I know what you mean! I would kill to try that out.

For the edit.. All I really noticed was a bit of shakiness in some of the shots.
 
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