What can I do to make this better?

Was the intro needed? It was a little boring and unneeded.

Alot of the shots were really shakey, im guessing you have a cheap tripod?

Some of the framing was good some was bad, try to keep the subject in frame at all times if you can.
 
The colors looked good imo, the slow mo was kinda choppy, maybe if you want to do slow mo, then shoot at a higher frame rate like 60p. Some tricks were repeated, and some of the filming was shaky...
 
Well, thats your problem, don't shoot handheld.

The slow motion was very choppy too. Did you shoot 60?
 
1920x1080 at 30p but in fcp there was interlace line and I was like wtf so I used the de-interlace thing... and on my camera I can't find 60p
 
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