Website Critique

*Fujative*

*Fujative*

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Alright, first off I got some criticism last time about the layout and how it looked too "templete" although I designed it from scratch. I want to "finish" the site for now, and then work on it to make it better. I'm looking at using the plugin called "Galleria" to display my photos instead. So for now, this is what I have, however soon, will be changing it to Galleria. What are your thoughts?
http://www.evanbutka.com

Galleriahttp://devkick.com/lab/galleria/
 
im no pro with this shit

but that site is dope

cool, interesting pictures

cool layout, simple.

real good
 
your site is great! the layout is simple and very easy to navigate. the pictures are really quality as well. I like your portrait work and some of the more conceptual commercial pictures like the fish bowl faucet one. you really have a great talent and your site shows it.
a couple suggestions,
there were a few photos that just didn't seem as well-done or as high quality as most of your work on there which I think you could remove. in particular the third to last and the last portrait shot.
also in the portraits section i think picking the single best shot of the girls with face paint should make it stand out more. also pick the single best shot of the 6 shots that all have the same shallow focus close up. they all just kind of look like the same picture 6 times in a row.
i think to a client, your work will pop more and show more variety if you take out the repeat shots i mentioned above.
just my thoughts, but really your site rocks. great work!
 
cool pics, nice layout, but i took a look at your code and its awful. i realize that you probably have more of a graphics/design background but you should learn some css & stuff. just cuting up a psd leaves you with a billion images in a weird table
 
The thing is I didnt use code, I used fireworks. I should learn css, and Im slowly getting it, its just different.
 
Thanks! I know I have a lot od pictures and want not. I know I need to scale it down. I just wanted the site up, and then I can tweak it from there.
 
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