Very Proper Design

GANKI

GANKI

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I started this website mainly so I could have an online portfolio for when I apply for some internships. I decided to add a blog and am making some apparel too. check it out let me know what you think and if you dig it then word up

http://veryproperdesign.com

 
Well standard squarespace layout, not much stuff so far, too many music youtube videos.

Also if you are actually looking to be a serious designer I would refrain from using copyrighted images.

I mean the one of glamour model Valeria Orsini
 
I would take this off of your site if you want anyone to take you seriously.

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I would also work on the name of your company
 
Your logo is not balanced at all. The V is way overstated and the P is pretty understated. Also it looks uneven mixing the "chalkboard" style of the VP and the hard edged circle around it.
 
In the about section, the grey text is VERY hard to read on the white background. Also, don't say "... go skiing with all the homies..." if you want to be taken seriously.
 
I think that your blog would be better if you added some of your own creations--maybe some insight of your process or current events or something. it's cool to see inspiration, but it would probably be better if you went on more about why it's inspiring. otherwise, it kind of takes away from you personally, which isn't the purpose of the website.
 
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