University project: Rail slide trick tips

[manabadman]

Hey Newschoolers,

As part of a project for my uni course i've been asked to develop a teaching resource. So i've done a trick tips video.

In part of my portfolio I need to include some feedback from my target audience. So feedback from you guys would be greatly appreciated.

The focus is really on the actual teaching aspect, so it would be really helpful if you could comment on improvements with regards to this, rather than my standard of skiing or editing skills!

25% of the marks are for "innovation", hence the arrows etc. and the "four stages of the rail slide". I know its bullshit but sometimes you've just got to jump through the hoops.

Untitled Project from Tom Blaszczyk on Vimeo.

https://vimeo.com/89183287

+K

 

[Bhroscoe]

Very well done. If I had to critique one thing it would be that the intro is a little too long with that sliding text.

 

[manabadman]

Thanks bro +K

 

[BlackcountryBill]

Bafta.

 

[boomie]

My only critique would be to duck the background noise a little bit when you first start talking in the beginning. You did it well later on in the video.

 

[HWW]

Nice vid man. +

 

[manabadman]

thanks, +k

 

[MLJ]

This is actually really good!One thing I would suggest is to speak with more intonation, especially at the end because it makes you sound uninterested in the subject, which I know is probably not true.