Thoughts on my 2 newest edits. +k for good feedback

First onePros:

Filming was pretty good overall

Color was really nice.

Video quality was good

Edit had some flow

Cons:

the skiing

The intro

Most of it was bails

0:58 NO!

Second one

Pros:

Quality was good again

Color was good

Flowed well

Skiing was better overall

Cons:

I didn't really like the OHH after the intro shots

0:44 seemed kinda cheesy

Short

Camera wasnt always smooth

Overall I enjoyed watching them, good job man!
 
They were both pretty short but that wasn't a big issue. The first one had a few too many crashes. The second one was a lot better and had several sick shots. As mentioned above, I didn't really like what you did with the last shot. I didn't think it was the sickest shot so I don't know why you put so much focus on it. I would have been fine with the same idea (music cutting out and stuff) if it was with one of your other shots.

Overall, I thought they were both really good. Maybe you could combine the footage to make a slightly longer edit and cut out a few of the crashes.
 
some of the shots were pretty good there just weren't enough of them. take out the clips where the skiier doesn't even make it to the end of the rail. second edit was a little better than the first though. you need more of the good footage, and ALOT less of the bad.
 
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