Some form of stabilisation would have made everything generally nicer to watch, there were times where there was a fair amount of camera shake which took away from the shot. I thought the ramped slow mo got really repetitive, I think if you had used it on very select shots it would have been more interesting, for instance I liked it on the 4 out nose press thing, but there were a lot of other shots that I didn't feel warranted it. Wasn't sure on the song choice, the song it's self is good but I didn't think it really fit the edit if you know what I mean?
Maybe try and throw in some different angles as well, some more follow cams would have been nice to see also.