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.jr
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Better than I was expecting.
Negs
50 cent
A thank you for coming sign, followed by a welcome sign as your into
Twixtor
shaky follows
Inconsistent exposures - check later in the edit maybe around 2:00 and after
Nice shot at like :47 with the flare work, intentional or not, just needed a better looking trick.
Negs
50 cent
A thank you for coming sign, followed by a welcome sign as your into
Twixtor
shaky follows
Inconsistent exposures - check later in the edit maybe around 2:00 and after
Nice shot at like :47 with the flare work, intentional or not, just needed a better looking trick.
Shredability
Active member
yeeeee sick edit, who was the ski po so mad haha
titles. The "productions" title was too bold to make sense, I skipped back trying to figure out where your production company logo was figuring it would be bigger because you put so much emphasis on "productions". Then I realized it was on the helmet. As for the other ones- I would suggest that unless you get some graphic design and typography experience, you just choose a nice typeface and set your titles in it, not super large. Maybe add a little tracking for some style.
One thing - is CSP just you? If you aren't some sort of commercial entity, I suggest instead of naming yourself as a "Production company", you simply include "shot and and edited by name". Trust me, it's viewed as much more professional. That's just a little piece of advice on the side!
One thing - is CSP just you? If you aren't some sort of commercial entity, I suggest instead of naming yourself as a "Production company", you simply include "shot and and edited by name". Trust me, it's viewed as much more professional. That's just a little piece of advice on the side!
Stickity
Active member
personally, i'm not a fan of having one shot of a trick change to a different shot of the same trick
showing the whole trick then a different angle is fine but changing in the middle irks me
wasn't that big of a problem but a few rail tricks with 4s out or w/e were kinda landed sideways, clean it up looks way better and you'll be skiing better
i'm all for showing the names of skiers but maybe do it like a title in the shot of them doing a trick to start them off instead of NAME for 3 seconds then a shot
one example i can think of is whoever did a disaster for the first clip
maybe put his name on the box or something, i feel like it'd have a better flow and a more creative feel if you integrated the names into the shots
but very sick over all
showing the whole trick then a different angle is fine but changing in the middle irks me
wasn't that big of a problem but a few rail tricks with 4s out or w/e were kinda landed sideways, clean it up looks way better and you'll be skiing better
i'm all for showing the names of skiers but maybe do it like a title in the shot of them doing a trick to start them off instead of NAME for 3 seconds then a shot
one example i can think of is whoever did a disaster for the first clip
maybe put his name on the box or something, i feel like it'd have a better flow and a more creative feel if you integrated the names into the shots
but very sick over all
Yung_Gnarley
Active member
3 songs for a 3 minute edit? I'm confused...