Spend More Time Outside : short video critique

For such a strong/suggestive title, I was disappointed that there wasn't more of a story/narrative to accompany it
 
13714938:Sklar said:
For such a strong/suggestive title, I was disappointed that there wasn't more of a story/narrative to accompany it

I wasn't telling a story, just existing outside with friends and a camera, that was more the point of the video than there being a story line or a narrative, appreciate the feedback though!
 
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