Spatial distortion

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Mkvackay

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small assignment done for one of my cinema classes. thought id post it up

no necessary critiques. just a small
 
Hahahah that was great... but one small critique if I may. IMO your shots would have looked better if you had cut the beginning and end of any given clip with the subject still in frame. Like between the shot at :12 and :14, I think you should have ended the first shot with him still in frame and started the second with him in frame as well. It's because if you cut when he's still in frame, there's more fluidity to it, and it might seem to you that it doesn't work well, but to the viewer who is just watching for the first time, they automatically stitch the two shots together and it's much more continuous. Other than that, good job, I liked the colors and contrast for the most part
 
thanks man. like i said it was just an exercise, it was not a class project. but thanks for those suggestions
 
yeah awesome... that's what my video teacher at school told us so i thought i'd just pass it on.
 
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