So it's been a while since I asked for critique.

sorry dude you sound soo white and your flow is non existant. really choppy and herky jerky. sorry man
 
did you make that first beat? cause its damn good. if you made it, you should probably just focus on making beats.
 
there's a little too much unnecessary hate right here..... I'm not going to lie and sugar coat because I don't really like it man, but I will admit that had you been born black and had a silky smooth deep voice, you would be a hit.
 
To be brutally honest, unless you can somehow change your voice I don't see much happening, not trying to be a dick but just stating something I notice
 
ha. you don't know shit about me. don't try to act tough over the internet, it doesn't work.

and thanks for the comments above guys. i've heard it all before about the voice, I can't really change it. blah
 
try to do less syncopation of your voice, and go for more of an even flow, i think it might work a little better. i see more potential in your music if you'd go for a more chill voice, like it ain't no thang. hope that helps, but sounds decent, keep it up.
 
I like your flow and the beats, but to be honest your voice is just a little too squeaky, and not a solid rappers voice, but besides that is it pretty damn good.
 
wtf guys, i like matt's stuff, i think it's coming along great. haters hate dude, keep doing what you love man.

and to p-ness, go insert yourself into your right hand and fuck off. no one wants to hear the unnecessary hate bullshit you splurge.
 
not bad, you need to change your tone more and variate your flow. get more into it, in whatever style. the vocals got pretty robotic especially on the second one. for the beats, i dont really dig the instruements. get better samples and what not.

more cowbell
 
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