Ya its alot easier to make songs while theres a story or idea to follow and by the sounds of it if you pull yours off well then it can be sick. I've never tried reason or that other program your using but its really easy to imput computer voices in FL.
I don't think that was Dance music its alot closer to psy and goa trance imo. I listened to all of them and some of them i didn't like the tones of the synths/instruments . Your prolly alot better at this than me but i'm just gonna say this because this is what i would do, although you prolly did so till you got your preference. For some instruments/synths (like the ones in trip.hard) Tamper with the VST's (or whatever you used) a bit more, layer, equalize, and compress*, filter* (*maybe) each sound to make it more humanized (only word i could come up with). All in all i think you did a good job. I'm gonna listen to the whole thing again before i post again.