a lot of your shots looked shakey, especially the opening segment. oh hey new and un-used song, screeching at :52?, the whole zoom in super far after a trick kinda got repetitive (though I did like one where you caught the guys face real well)
yeah the screech shot was my friend filming. I do not own a tripod at the moment, but i really need to get one, and i'll also incorporate some dolly shots and think of better transitions. tHANKS GUYS !