short poem i wrote

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lewski16

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i just wrote this. i thought of most of it while running, so it may be a bit disjointed. please post comments if you feel like it.--

What is night but the shadow of the earth?

And what is death but a cycle of rebirth?

We try so hard to smother the impressions that we make,

But still feed off one another like ripples in a lake.

Recklessly we ramble on, at life’s inhuman rate.

Not resting in our cruel descent, eluding our true fate.

But pausing in the race to lend an ear to others’ needs

We dam the tide of saving face, and the brutality it breeds.

Among a sea of seeing eyes, where no one seems to hear

Who set out to form the ties, to whom do you feel near?

In floating past we wonder why, no one seems to get the clue

But when the stakes are just that high, what is it to you?

 
hiaku:

i'm in bed at eight

and i'm home by eleven

filler filler er.

thank you.

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Good Fun With A Hand Gun.

MiKeE: If Shaun White is hot I hope I'm ugly.

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hoodratz47: sweet your now black....
 
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-COUNTRY MUSIC GIVES YOU HERPES-

- Hey kids, theres juice under the sink! -

Recipe for making an ass of yourself:

1. Become as gay as possible.

2. Try to fit in.

3. Drink the bong water.

 
the last line shouldve been giggedy gigdy

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You know the Nazis had pieces of flair that they made the Jews wear.

once back when i was a fetus i was aborted. it didn't hurt at all, but i was also high on life at the time. - thisangelicrage

Smuggs has a good point. Julia Roberts tried eating me when i was an orphan, but i bit her toe off, so she left me alone. - misterbinz
 
i sing and write songs while i poop. thats were i wrote my hit'I POOP IN A TOILET'...good song

Toilets are so damn hot right now

 
I am incapable of telling what makes a poem better than an other. My poetic sense is zero. We had to write a poem this year and I failed. I could post it's so bad but it's in french.

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'Families is where our nation finds hope, where wings take dream.'

'I understand small business growth. I was one'

-Dubya!
 
sorry lewski, but asac's poem worked yours

'On a scale of 1 - 10, you all are extremely gay' - coolcat410

'Wow, half of you people is morons' - sporegasm

'im gonna vote fer bush bec he has done good things' - estaked

'There is nothing wrong with Pres. Bush.' - ScratchCobra66

 
Limerick-

i once new a fat officer named guts

He liked to eat donuts

and he patrolled the streets

in his officer cleats

with which he kicked bad guys in the nuts

Luga....P.Crew
 
This is why we are alive

We all live like we are going to die

We are here, We are high

And this is why we love to live our lives

-A.W.K.

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Good Fun With A Hand Gun.

MiKeE: If Shaun White is hot I hope I'm ugly.

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hoodratz47: sweet your now black....
 
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