color scheme is whack!
go neon green shirt with a posterized version of saucer boy in the same postion, posterized in purple and yellow, maybe orange, neon of course, and then across the sleeves on on the mid upper back write, "RIP Shane, you inspired us all"
plan simple, for real, and all over cleaner, maybe put shane mcconkey on the front with the dates put it adjacent to the saucer boy picture, or put the portrait of him adjacent to saucer boy
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