Sayable?

i have yet in my life to see one person who cares about me.and it kills me to admit such heartbreaking epiphany.

is this grammarly correct?
 
I have yet in my life to see one person who cares about me, and it kills me to admit such a heartbreaking epiphany. Now it's grammatically correct. Contextually, ya you're using it correctly; it's being used synonymously with realization.
 
^ this would mean that he is using epiphany correctly because he is stating he had a sudden realization that no one cares for him or something. Which is a pretty depressing thing to say
 
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