RONALD - Short film

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This is a film made by some kids at my school, posted just yesterday. If you cannot understand whats going on in the video, it about a ronald mcdonald pencil that everyone wants and is trying to get. Let me know what you think and i can give them some feedback!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G59napVAR5s

 

[gravel]

TOO MUCH VIGNETTE!!!!!

 

[dispatchQ_main]

Honestly couldn't stand watching it. Acting was so bad and not even funny bad.

 

[dergblerp]

I thought it was pretty good for a high school movie (especially compared to my high school movies haha). I definitely agree on the vignette. My main criticism is that I don't think the idea was quite long enough to sustain a 10 minute movie. Probably would be better if you cut it down to 3-4 minutes. You could easily do that with the footage that you have and still tell the exact same story. Overall pretty fun though. I like all the random little goofy sequences you threw in.

 

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I'll let em know! And yeah I though it was good fOr a highschool film. Not like they are professional actors..