RONALD - Short film

I thought it was pretty good for a high school movie (especially compared to my high school movies haha). I definitely agree on the vignette. My main criticism is that I don't think the idea was quite long enough to sustain a 10 minute movie. Probably would be better if you cut it down to 3-4 minutes. You could easily do that with the footage that you have and still tell the exact same story. Overall pretty fun though. I like all the random little goofy sequences you threw in.
 
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