Reel Critique For Those Who Have Some Time

[Irotate360]

Figured it was about time to put a sample of work together for freelance opportunities and whatnot. Let me know what you guys think. I'm Finally saving some cash to get a nice HD cam so I can junk the SD ones I've been using for the past few years... but overall I'm happy with how the edit came out. It's not Alex Horner quality but with time...
http://vimeo.com/14810824

Ps... Don't hate on the song choice, please.

 

[50in07]

I felt that it could have been really good but the song totally ruined it for me.

 

[robert77]

Song did not match at ALLsome cool effects though

 

[.jr]

Id go ahead and take off 'professional' from that video. Sorry dude but it screamed junior in highschool who is just learning and likes to play with neato effects.

 

[MAC.D]

ummmm and you spelled it "pofessional". Kinda ironic.

 

[.jr]

nice snag!

 

[Blandct]

I would keep practicing...that's all I have to say.

 

[Irotate360]

Thanks guys but does anyone have any actual constructive criticism

 

[jeremy.g]

song did not equate with edit at all