Proof read this for me.

[Peach.]

Hey guys this is the e-mail I am about to send to my speech and debate coach about quitting the team due to skiing (yay) and my job (nay) If theres anything I need to add/change let me know.

I feel it is neccessary for me to quit speech and debate. I feel I just cant do it justice because of prior commitments limiting my practice time both with and without the team, and attending meets.

Thank you for understanding,

Cody

 

[pmills]

can you make it more concise? it's a bit long

 

[liukangkid]

why dont you talk to him? it would be easier and it wont look like your just ducking out of it as much.

 

[rj.]

who gives a shit? just quit, it's speech.

 

[brandon_]

agreed..

 

[Mr_Papageorgio]

Due to numerous prior commitments that will soon begin to take a toll on the amount of time I can devote to Speech and Debate, I regret to inform you that I will have to quit the team. If there is anything in the future that I can do for you or to help the team, please do not hesitate to let me know.
Thank you for the opportunity.
Best,
Cody (Last Name)

 

[k-rob]

they paying you? no? then just stop showing up.

 

[Mr_Papageorgio]

and erase a potential reference for what could be a very meaningful slot-filler on a resume..
i know what you're saying but a simple email is all it takes to not cut a tie ya know?

 

[the_moderaper]

holy niggers just send it. cant u proof read 3 sentenced yourself?? its fine send it. yes i did proof read it too

 

[Peach.]

Hey chill on the N word man. It's not cool anymore,.

 

[kepler.]

What are you, the nigger police?

 

[Style+eeze]

this

 

[Peach.]

Thanks for the input. But I sent this a long time ago.

 

[kepler.]

It's ok everyone. My black roommate cleared my usage of nigger. No need to kill my karmazz. It's just a fucking word, jesus.

 

[[Dawn]

 

[Delphi]

HHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA

On another note, a friend of mine quit the hockey team in highschool team without ever telling the coach, and the guy didn't even notice. Doesn't sound funny online, but it was damn funny in person.