Please critique my video

[b_r_tregs]

I looked at some of the advice in my last thread from a wile ago and made a new video to be judged.So please tell me what i should do differently, take away, or add on.

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Feel free to speak your mind

 

[b_r_tregs]

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[b_r_tregs]

God dam it won't work

 

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Either crop you video center or don't do it, and also it needed to be way longer it was only an intro, not sure if that's all you wanted and try to get stable shots

 

[sweatshirt]

no offense but if you don't have the common sense to see how bad that was then that's pretty embarrassing .

 

[b_r_tregs]

Yea i was just looking for an intro

 

[monkatizer]

what does "looking for an intro" mean?

 

[b_r_tregs]

It means i meant to make an intro

trying new color correcting and stuff just to see if i can apply in a short clip so if i make a full edit its not that bad so i know what to do better.

 

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what did you film it on and why at 480p?

 

[b_r_tregs]

I filmed with t3i and for some reason it did not export to 720p i am not sure why. It usually does it on its own.