Please critique my edit

[Bi-ShredinalGuy]

I made one last year, you guys didn't like it too much.. although I am pretty confident I did better this year! Spent over 50 hours on this. If you think it sucks, tell me it sucks don't be shy. I made this for a friend's graduation party. Music starts around 1:20 if you are impatient.

 

[DBL]

Good job for the most part! Sorry for the format, I'm on mobile. Anyways, I liked the first part, after the intro, when the music started, after that it felt kinda repetitive, although more boring if anything. It was really long IMO. In some shots you were to far away, and it was hard to see what was going on. That's all I can say and good luck in the future!

 

[Bi-ShredinalGuy]

Thanks. Yeah I know a lot of the shot's weren't ideal, this was all from 3 days of filming so I didn't have a lot to choose from.