Now which one has better editing?

[*KLULESS*]

or

i took your advice, and changed it up a bit, although there are still some effects, thats how i edit.

 

[KarmaInitiative]

first one has more shot variation

try to avoid unnecessary effects that dont add anything, i saw one or two

also some of the titles were hard to read, especially the vertical ones. keep it simple on those

 

[ReignMan]

or

 

[SeanTom]

for the most part i liked the second one more

 

[C-Barna]

the only thing that u have in ur edit that i dont have in mine is at some points u slowed it down, and then tons of flashing thats it.

 

[MTshred]

awful music. But yeah you need more camera angles. and no effects.

 

[TheGreen]

I know you asked about editing, but PLEASE clean your lens for god's sake. That shot of the sun in the first edit made me want to cry.