Not another rap thread.

[Bludbath]

So just recorded this a few days ago, first verse is me second is the homie who has been rapping for a long ass time.

Feel free to give constructive criticism/hate/love/what ever the fuck it's all good.

 

[S.J.W]

song is raw as fuck, for a beginner you have a great flow and lyrics! put a mix tape online and you should be able to get some exposure, hell i'd download it

 

[bwilson17]

Good flow, nice beat, I liked it.

 

[Lou.]

Not bad at all

 

[TopherRitz]

Being really honest the lyrics were pretty dull but good flow. Keep workin at it.

 

[Bludbath]

Thank you all for your responses so far, I appreciate your input.

 

[CrotchKiller]

lyrics were a little bland to be honest. your flow was good though, just keep writing