Newschoolers Commercials

Justin.B

Justin.B

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Alright so I got inspired a while back by a thread in Site Discussion about a couple NS commercials he made. So I decided to make my own. I made it, and got a lot of awesome feedback so I decided to create another one today. So check em out, Tell me which you think is better and try and make your own!

Mods if i put this in the wrong section move it, but i thought NSG would be suitable.

Newschoolers Commercial #1

Courtesy of Newschoolers.com

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Newschoolers Commercial, Take: 2

Courtesy of Newschoolers.com

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the second one doesn't even have an end haha

to be honest if i saw either of these on tv i would probably piss my pants. good idea maybe but the execution wasn't great
 
too late

thanks to all the edits i've seen on here i now want to kick a baby in the face every time i hear that song.
 
i know its too late. i thought maybe it could be saved but no...and i seem to be hearing it more and more lately :(

 
ehh +K for effort but most commercials are 30seconds, you could cut out most of the reptitve graphics and start by making it more apparent that its skiing related.
 
I wasnt really basing them on TV, it was more of me being at home bored and decided to throw some shit together for a little NS commercial, and ya 2nd one ending sucks i know.
 
yes i realize that, the thing I wanted to change in the 2nd was I wanted to show what NS was all about with forums, contest, media etc. and thats the thing I chaned.

Just so ya know :)
 
i don't like the pictures, i'd rather see videos

make it like a 25 second clip of someone slaying, then 5 seconds to flash the NS logo and stuff offered on the site
 
i would say that you could probably just take out the pictures, and maybe start the with a quick video. i definitely liked the second one better though. nice job
 
ok, no hate or anything...
but those were terrible.
i'm sorry, but imagine seeing those on TV... they're just awful. if that was what was on TV representing this site and our sport, i'd be embarrassed.
 
haha c'mon dude lighten up. If I were seriou about this at all theyd be 30 seconds and have a lot more effort. I threw them together to see what people thought of them, not trying to be serious or anything. and no, im not taking it as hate.
 
i AM lightening up... notice that i didn't personally attack you or swear? that took a lot for me.
i'm in an audio production program and do a lot of work with DFVP (digital film and video production, for tha n00bs)... i realize you probably have no formal training, so i wasn't a complete dick to you, but let's just say those could use a little revision.
 
I have a fetish for your bindsouls. and pretty much anything else you do on a rail. Its fuckin sick and so tech and smooth.

Just so ya know

 
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