New Edit: STREETDIE // Jam A Little While Critique please

[NPF]

Just finished my newest edit and I would love some critique.

Password: Zak

This was my first time trying to use colour corrector so some feedback on that would be sick too!

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[j-cal]

Liked it alot. Some really good shots. Edit flowed nicely. the only thing is some shots had some wierd framing. For example that one shot of his big 180 on the jump. Other than killer edit. Also the riding was great.

 

[CrotchKiller]

shot at 1:20 should not be in there... The trick looked terrible

 

[No.Quarter]

It says it is a private video

 

[No.Quarter]

wow, I am truly retarded...

 

[NPF]

alright i played around with it and add some shots ad took some out. uploading now so ill let you guys know when its done.

 

[NPF]

Alright i am all done and just released it. CHECK IT OUT

STREETDIE // Jam A Little While from NPF on Vimeo.

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[NPF]

critique away haha i enjoy the feedback.

It is up on NS now too.

https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/617412.0/STREETDIE----Jam-A-Little-While?c=11&o=10&t=6

 

[NPF]

bump

 

[KillaSteeze]

that was amazing, loved all the shots were Zak was hitting that hip on the side of the landing and you were filming while moving the opposite way

 

[NPF]

Thank you! ive been trying to mix things up a bit with angles. i stil stood at the bottom of the features a lot but the next time i go up i am gonna try and mix it around a bit.