The only thing that was off was the use of shots involving frontside tricks. You had pretty much no front 2s off, and would it kill you to throw a front 4 in there?
- It should have had more 2s and 4s out- You should have used a even less popular song, like Coastin' or Sail
- You should have used more blur/ fade effects at the end of each shot
- You should open your jackets even more
- You should ALWAYS ignore the video section and post your edits directly to ski gabber (It gets your edit more recognized and gives you more positive and creative feedback)
You would benefit from a different song choice, but other than that pretty good filming, quality, and of course skiing. Change up the song and it will be very good